I enjoyed the new update. Saw a few errors but they didn't ruin it and no doubt others will be able to spellcheck for you. As to the tags that have been mentioned, I am down for simple romance adding to the story and characters so whatever you give I will no doubt be fine with.

I kinda "infer" that it will use the adult romance to add to the characters and story but not go full on porn with it, I feel like it may be your simple romance that comes with a lot of detective stories, which I am down with... At least as long as it isn't dark or too depraved lol 

Hey dev keep up the good work any girl on girl action and group sex(ffm/fffm) in the upcoming chapters ?

Is it updated

do choices even matter? there is no difference at all when i pick them and no indication if my choice raised points or not which is boring ,  how come no one wants to mention skip button ignores unread content? makes it hard to use when you need it 

So far i have enjoyed the game and the story can't wait for more updates

Uugh, this is so good. A good game to play while waiting for Eternum. Definitely S-Tier with Eternum. Why can't all the masterpieces just be finished, man? Why can't I just binge it. 😔😔 Overall 10/10!!! Here's an extra, 100/10!!!

The story is very interesting, but the female characters' breasts are a bit too large, which looks a bit strange. I hope the characters can be optimized in version 0.4

is there going to be lesbian/bisexual/girl on girl stuff including in threesomes and if so will that be avoidable?

This game has exceeded my expectations!

Update the damn game brow or else i will shoot your house using minigun

Is there no way to hide the box that the text is in? It kind of takes up a lot of the screen on android. Would be nice is there was wn option  to change the transparency or hide it all together.

What is update 0.2.1?

One of the greatest game im ever played.... At least for the past few month :keanupointright:

可以上传除了mega和google drive的其他平台吗，没有vpn很难下载

What is the name of the song that is played when you meet Wintress? I can not find it. :D

毫不客气地说，这是一部非常精彩的作品，无论配乐或是剧情都很吸引我，希望下一个版本能有更多有趣的内容，顺便一问，一个版本的制作周期大致会处于一个多久的范围

I just finished playing this and it's really amazing,The graphics is good but it's buggy idk why. And the story is interesting I really like it.

Also the girls is so hot and beautiful they have large GYATTT, I can't focus while playing it lol.

I Can't wait for new update.

Kid named Sherlock becomes a detective, peak.

I can't, more like wouldn't make a huge review like @Ralkey, but I overall agree w/ his review.

This Visual Novel has tons of potential, sound effects are wonderful, and the story is interesting, pulling you in... I can see you trying animations/scenes that aren't common. 3D animation, as the camera flying around the room, while also having a POV of a drone.

I really look forward to what you make in the future, but especially this VN. You've done well for the intro/first chapter.

Appreciate you making this VN, and wish you the best.

Val's side boobs caught me off guard

looks interesting 

Just saw random discord conversation praising this so gonna give it a try.  Man seeing people praise bgm,sound,girls, backgrounds, writing  i really gotta sleep 1am but it seems i might need to play longer ahah. Can't wait to play and read this. Hope more people can find your work and support you!  

I just found this game a accidently because of "TheRog" and this game is damn well good

Hi dev, I would like to ask what are the future tags and if you are planning to include ntr(I hope not) but either way, I'm not going to criticize it. I just would like to know before I play

TL;DR

This game is an absolute must-try, especially with sound and music on.

The story is being told in an understandable way for the reader, and it keeps the mystery.

The graphics look great.

And the story is really interesting, with it being creepy and mysterious at times.

The girls are also quite cute.

Lengthy review

This is all my opinion from the game.

From first opening the game to the menu, I was already delighted with what I experienced.
Normally I turn down the music, but the choice of music for the menu in this game fit perfectly with the atmosphere the game is trying to create. The little scribble sound when navigating the menu is also a delight to my ears, though it is a bit too loud.

Graphics

The background is absolutely stunning, with its warm yet natural feeling. The choice to make the train scene in the beginning a looping video is a great decision.
Alongside the great sound design, it really pulls me into the experience.

0.1

Sadly this quality doesn't always persist through the rest of 0.1, at other points the lack of proper shading becomes really obvious, making the images look flat.
Or the background will not make use of a blur.

Sometimes you can find rough edges caused by a lack of Anti-Aliasing, or the FOV is too high, or the scene composition isn't done as well.

These tiny things can make or break an image.

Though these are all minor things, it's by far not bad enough for me to discredit the game.

0.2

0.2 has a serious increase in quality compared to 0.1.

Most of the issues I had with 0.1's graphics have been fixed, such as the lack of Anti-Aliasing.

However, the bloom in the beginning is too high in my opinion.

UI

With the decision to only show parts of the full text at a time, it really makes the reading of the story approachable for people who can't focus on large bodies of text, also adds to the mysterious feeling.

And the minimalistic yet drawn feeling I get from the UI is also great.

Music / Sound

The music is great, it's not some NCS bull crap, but proper music to fit the atmosphere.

The SFX, such as the train, is also done quite well, making for a more realistic experience.

One thing I have noticed is that the music doesn't repeat smoothly.

Story

The Story is REALLY interesting.
I have nothing else to say except that it's a great read, it's both creepy and mysterious at times.

Girls

The girls are also really cute, greatly designed.
But the extreme breast size and extreme hair colors can be quite weird at times. Such as Skye's full on yellow hair and breast size at certain angles. (Though this is all my opinion on the character design)

That's all I can really say about it 😅

Conclusion

This is a great game with a really cool story and cute girls.

It is definitely a must-try.

PEAK HAS ARRIVED ! ! ! Thank you, dev 🙌

Hey, Rog there! Just from the screenshots of the game, I can see the pure potential your work emits. I bet the game will be fire! 🔥 🔥 🔥 

(and i hope there will be an android release :P)

Where is the button to install it ?I dont see it.

Ohhh is this a new one fam definitely waiting for this masterpiece to become something in the future fam stay awesome now :D

i want to make a game, and dont know how to get started, im trying to get characters and scenes using ren'py but cant figure it out. I also don't know how to add script. please let me know about any character generators you might have or any ways that i can add script to the game.

Hey man, it's Babysnake here! Don't forget that I was your third comment here. The plot sounds pretty interesting—I'm curious to see how it'll all play out when it's finally released. Have a great day, buddy!

Hey, mate, second comment here. I'm just going to say that I'm looking forward to playing your wonderful game. Have a nice day, mate. 

Hey, remember me, i am Kz, and i am your first comment. Your game looks good, i haven't played it but i will right away, have a good day

update: where is the download link?