Sorry, pal, but you might need to head over to my Discord channel or Patreon to access that content. The lyrics and the stories behind them are exclusive perks for my supporters.
I can't, more like wouldn't make a huge review like @Ralkey, but I overall agree w/ his review.
This Visual Novel has tons of potential, sound effects are wonderful, and the story is interesting, pulling you in... I can see you trying animations/scenes that aren't common. 3D animation, as the camera flying around the room, while also having a POV of a drone.
I really look forward to what you make in the future, but especially this VN. You've done well for the intro/first chapter.
Appreciate you making this VN, and wish you the best.
Just saw random discord conversation praising this so gonna give it a try. Man seeing people praise bgm,sound,girls, backgrounds, writing i really gotta sleep 1am but it seems i might need to play longer ahah. Can't wait to play and read this. Hope more people can find your work and support you!
Hi dev, I would like to ask what are the future tags and if you are planning to include ntr(I hope not) but either way, I'm not going to criticize it. I just would like to know before I play
This game is an absolute must-try, especially with sound and music on.
The story is being told in an understandable way for the reader, and it keeps the mystery.
The graphics look great.
And the story is really interesting, with it being creepy and mysterious at times.
The girls are also quite cute.
Lengthy review
This is all my opinion from the game.
From first opening the game to the menu, I was already delighted with what I experienced. Normally I turn down the music, but the choice of music for the menu in this game fit perfectly with the atmosphere the game is trying to create. The little scribble sound when navigating the menu is also a delight to my ears, though it is a bit too loud.
Graphics
The background is absolutely stunning, with its warm yet natural feeling. The choice to make the train scene in the beginning a looping video is a great decision. Alongside the great sound design, it really pulls me into the experience.
0.1
Sadly this quality doesn't always persist through the rest of 0.1, at other points the lack of proper shading becomes really obvious, making the images look flat. Or the background will not make use of a blur.
Sometimes you can find rough edges caused by a lack of Anti-Aliasing, or the FOV is too high, or the scene composition isn't done as well.
These tiny things can make or break an image.
Though these are all minor things, it's by far not bad enough for me to discredit the game.
0.2
0.2 has a serious increase in quality compared to 0.1.
Most of the issues I had with 0.1's graphics have been fixed, such as the lack of Anti-Aliasing.
However, the bloom in the beginning is too high in my opinion.
UI
With the decision to only show parts of the full text at a time, it really makes the reading of the story approachable for people who can't focus on large bodies of text, also adds to the mysterious feeling.
And the minimalistic yet drawn feeling I get from the UI is also great.
Music / Sound
The music is great, it's not some NCS bull crap, but proper music to fit the atmosphere.
The SFX, such as the train, is also done quite well, making for a more realistic experience.
One thing I have noticed is that the music doesn't repeat smoothly.
Story
The Story is REALLY interesting. I have nothing else to say except that it's a great read, it's both creepy and mysterious at times.
Girls
The girls are also really cute, greatly designed. But the extreme breast size and extreme hair colors can be quite weird at times. Such as Skye's full on yellow hair and breast size at certain angles. (Though this is all my opinion on the character design)
That's all I can really say about it 😅
Conclusion
This is a great game with a really cool story and cute girls.
i want to make a game, and dont know how to get started, im trying to get characters and scenes using ren'py but cant figure it out. I also don't know how to add script. please let me know about any character generators you might have or any ways that i can add script to the game.
Hey man, it's Babysnake here! Don't forget that I was your third comment here. The plot sounds pretty interesting—I'm curious to see how it'll all play out when it's finally released. Have a great day, buddy!
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One of the greatest game im ever played.... At least for the past few month :keanupointright:
可以上传除了mega和google drive的其他平台吗，没有vpn很难下载
抱歉...我也只有這兩個雲端帳號
没关系，加油！！
请问itch的官方平台可以上传吗？
檔案大小似乎超過了網站的限制
What is the name of the song that is played when you meet Wintress? I can not find it. :D
Sorry, pal, but you might need to head over to my Discord channel or Patreon to access that content. The lyrics and the stories behind them are exclusive perks for my supporters.
Okay. Thank you! :)
I know that song it's
https://www.patreon.com/DiveBar :D
M8, I think he is referring Wen's theme song, I haven't uploaded to Patreon, but it is available in the Discord channel already:D
毫不客气地说，这是一部非常精彩的作品，无论配乐或是剧情都很吸引我，希望下一个版本能有更多有趣的内容，顺便一问，一个版本的制作周期大致会处于一个多久的范围
我到0.3版本前都會是三個月為一個週期，預估會在12月底更新，後續可能要看贊助收入有沒有辦法足夠支撐基礎的生活開銷，如果沒辦法的話就得找一份正職工作，遊戲更新的週期可能會拉長至半年一更
I just finished playing this and it's really amazing,The graphics is good but it's buggy idk why. And the story is interesting I really like it.
Also the girls is so hot and beautiful they have large GYATTT, I can't focus while playing it lol.
I Can't wait for new update.
Really nigga "GYATT" your too old for that shit only kids say that... Wait hold on how old are you?
Bro
I'm 19?
I haven't received any feedback about bugs so far. Could you let me know what issues you encountered?
Kid named Sherlock becomes a detective, peak.
Welp
My childhood hero deserves this.
I can't, more like wouldn't make a huge review like @Ralkey, but I overall agree w/ his review.
This Visual Novel has tons of potential, sound effects are wonderful, and the story is interesting, pulling you in... I can see you trying animations/scenes that aren't common. 3D animation, as the camera flying around the room, while also having a POV of a drone.
I really look forward to what you make in the future, but especially this VN. You've done well for the intro/first chapter.
Appreciate you making this VN, and wish you the best.
I'll definitely going try something new, stay tuned!
Val's side boobs caught me off guard
Can't blame u.
looks interesting
Indeed :P
Just saw random discord conversation praising this so gonna give it a try. Man seeing people praise bgm,sound,girls, backgrounds, writing i really gotta sleep 1am but it seems i might need to play longer ahah. Can't wait to play and read this. Hope more people can find your work and support you!
It's a strange feeling to see people talking about Profiler in places I didn't know about.XD
Have fun!
I just found this game a accidently because of "TheRog" and this game is damn well good
A very fortunate connection.
Hi dev, I would like to ask what are the future tags and if you are planning to include ntr(I hope not) but either way, I'm not going to criticize it. I just would like to know before I play
def not goin NTR i can promise
TL;DR
This game is an absolute must-try, especially with sound and music on.
The story is being told in an understandable way for the reader, and it keeps the mystery.
The graphics look great.
And the story is really interesting, with it being creepy and mysterious at times.
The girls are also quite cute.
Lengthy review
This is all my opinion from the game.
From first opening the game to the menu, I was already delighted with what I experienced.
Normally I turn down the music, but the choice of music for the menu in this game fit perfectly with the atmosphere the game is trying to create. The little scribble sound when navigating the menu is also a delight to my ears, though it is a bit too loud.
Graphics
The background is absolutely stunning, with its warm yet natural feeling. The choice to make the train scene in the beginning a looping video is a great decision.
Alongside the great sound design, it really pulls me into the experience.
0.1
Sadly this quality doesn't always persist through the rest of 0.1, at other points the lack of proper shading becomes really obvious, making the images look flat.
Or the background will not make use of a blur.
Sometimes you can find rough edges caused by a lack of Anti-Aliasing, or the FOV is too high, or the scene composition isn't done as well.
These tiny things can make or break an image.
Though these are all minor things, it's by far not bad enough for me to discredit the game.
0.2
0.2 has a serious increase in quality compared to 0.1.
Most of the issues I had with 0.1's graphics have been fixed, such as the lack of Anti-Aliasing.
However, the bloom in the beginning is too high in my opinion.
UI
With the decision to only show parts of the full text at a time, it really makes the reading of the story approachable for people who can't focus on large bodies of text, also adds to the mysterious feeling.
And the minimalistic yet drawn feeling I get from the UI is also great.
Music / Sound
The music is great, it's not some NCS bull crap, but proper music to fit the atmosphere.
The SFX, such as the train, is also done quite well, making for a more realistic experience.
One thing I have noticed is that the music doesn't repeat smoothly.
Story
The Story is REALLY interesting.
I have nothing else to say except that it's a great read, it's both creepy and mysterious at times.
Girls
The girls are also really cute, greatly designed.
But the extreme breast size and extreme hair colors can be quite weird at times. Such as Skye's full on yellow hair and breast size at certain angles. (Though this is all my opinion on the character design)
That's all I can really say about it 😅
Conclusion
This is a great game with a really cool story and cute girls.
It is definitely a must-try.
Thank you for savoring my work; your review is like a perfectly cooked dish.
I really appreciate it.
Thx for ur time.
(P.S I luv long reviews XD)
PEAK HAS ARRIVED ! ! ! Thank you, dev 🙌
My pleasure,pal
Hey, Rog there! Just from the screenshots of the game, I can see the pure potential your work emits. I bet the game will be fire! 🔥 🔥 🔥
(and i hope there will be an android release :P)
of course with android!
Give it a try,just upload🔥 🔥 🔥
and thx for ur compliment:D
Where is the button to install it ?I dont see it.
The game will be released on 8/24 18:00 GMT!
See you soon ;)
Ohhh is this a new one fam definitely waiting for this masterpiece to become something in the future fam stay awesome now :D
Thanks for the compliment XD
i want to make a game, and dont know how to get started, im trying to get characters and scenes using ren'py but cant figure it out. I also don't know how to add script. please let me know about any character generators you might have or any ways that i can add script to the game.
I can guide you through a small part of the initial stages, but the rest will depend on your own creativity!
You can join my Discord group to contact me.
ok sounds goo
which one are you on discord?
U can check the post;)
Hey man, it's Babysnake here! Don't forget that I was your third comment here. The plot sounds pretty interesting—I'm curious to see how it'll all play out when it's finally released. Have a great day, buddy!
I hope you won't think the story is too cliché after you finish 0.2!(ﾉ>ω<)ﾉ
Hey, mate, second comment here. I'm just going to say that I'm looking forward to playing your wonderful game. Have a nice day, mate.
Got u hommie(ﾉ∀`*)
Hey, remember me, i am Kz, and i am your first comment. Your game looks good, i haven't played it but i will right away, have a good day
update: where is the download link?
I'll keep in mind(〃∀〃)
The game will be released on 8/24 18:00 GMT
OK XDDDD